Kia Ora fellow bloggers this week for literacy we are doing poems my poem is like the original poem but about a thing that I did that was naughty and why mine is in blue is because we could change the black word up a little bit so it makes sense and now I am happy to introduce the person how wrote the original poem William Carlos Williams
My one
I have stolen
The drinks
That was in the fridge
And which
You were
Probably
Saving it for later
Forgive me
They were
yum
So sweet
And so cold
Original
i have eaten
the plums
that were in the icebox
and which
you were
probably
saving for breakfast
forgive me
they were
delicious
so sweet
and so cold
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